145: Visitors
Added 2026-01-03 19:46:09 +0000 UTCComments
Thank you for the chapter!
Metafy
2026-01-03 23:14:49 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter ๐
Alex V
2026-01-03 21:50:38 +0000 UTCYeah I believe the oh was an okay, Luis literally came in dropped off the writ and deed and was like yup that's it. But I'll have a look properly when I wake up, it's possible I messed up im pretty sleepy lol
T J Ward
2026-01-03 20:32:46 +0000 UTCTftc!
dkpfrog
2026-01-03 20:30:56 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter! As a bit of an aside from my editing brain: "I took the two scrolls and handed them to Hari, who stored them immediately. โOh, thatโs it for me,โ Luis said quickly. โI just donโt want to go back to the palace yet. You donโt mind if I hang around here for a bit? I wonโt get in your way.โ" It looks like something got lost here?
Hugsenuef
2026-01-03 20:30:54 +0000 UTCYeah I admit that was a bad cliff, but it wasn't intentional! I mentioned on discord, but if I had of done the conversation there I would have split the Hari family thing across two chapters and also had a really large chapter here, which wouldn't have been ideal. or, I split it where I did and cover all the family stuff in tomorrows chapter as one, it just would have flowed a lot better, but I fully recognised that cliff was evil lol
T J Ward
2026-01-03 20:19:45 +0000 UTCTyftc, but I'm DYING here!!!๐ญ๐คช
Crystal Petrosky
2026-01-03 20:17:03 +0000 UTCTFTC,
Hammy
2026-01-03 20:14:55 +0000 UTCTyftc
Jaklelope
2026-01-03 20:07:16 +0000 UTC
